literature

agony

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By

Dreameater55taker

Published: Dec 28, 2012

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Literature Text

witless wondering as i wondered the

empty land of my home,

my eyes dead with the horrors that i have seen.

they even with the blood that has fallen into them still a clear blue,

as blue as the sky that is no longer pure. my body my soul has been torn

apart so all i do is

wander

lost

need to be found

please

find me

save me from this endless pain

on this endless carousel of agony

this was interesting to write i think it fits best with my characters Henry, Ren and David

you dont know Henry or David so dont worry

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I love how you not only wrote the words with deep emotion but placed them so that the reader has to wander with what appears to be no rhyme or reason to read them just as the narrator describes. Excellent work